Thursday, June 10, 2010

LOUD like lightning

Creativity Boot Camp
Day 4
Topic: Heavy Metal

LOUD like lightning
And bright like thunder
Pressing my eardrums
Like earth torn asunder

Pressing my eardrums
Like earth torn asunder
Shaking my ribcage,
Pulling me under

Shaking my ribcage,
Pulling me under
Pulsing, convulsing,
Is it music? I wonder

Pulsing, convulsing
Is it music? I wonder
LOUD like lightning
Bright like thunder

1 comment:

  1. I like the way you change the lightning and thunder. It makes me envision the lighting LOUD in color and the thunder bright in sound. Great play on words.

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